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the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville

the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville VX1D

The provided maps illustrate the transformation that have taken place in the Kimsville town over the course of 19 years starting from 2002. Looking at the maps, it is clearly evident that the town underwent a number of dramatic changes. Overall, it is notably the construction of many buildings and facilities. In 2002, the shopping center was constructed in the north. There a number of trees were planted around the city. Nowadays, to the north-west of the area, trees were chopped down and replaced by news apartment and football stadium was built as a replacement for trees in the south-west.

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 town over the course of 19 years starting from 2002. Looking at the maps, it is clearly
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changes
. Overall
, it is notably
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many
 buildings and facilities. In 2002, the shopping center was constructed
 in the north. There a number of trees were planted
 around the city. Nowadays, to the north-west of the area, trees were chopped
 down and replaced by news apartment and football stadium was built
 as a replacement for trees in the south-west. 

IELTS academic the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville

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American English

1 paragraphs

100 words

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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