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the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville

the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville VX1D
The provided maps illustrate the transformation that have taken place in the Kimsville town over the course of 19 years starting from 2002. Looking at the maps, it is clearly evident that the town underwent a number of dramatic changes. Overall, it is notably the construction of many buildings and facilities. In 2002, the shopping center was constructed in the north. There a number of trees were planted around the city. Nowadays, to the north-west of the area, trees were chopped down and replaced by news apartment and football stadium was built as a replacement for trees in the south-west.
The provided maps illustrate the transformation that have taken place in the
Kimsville
town over the course of 19 years starting from 2002. Looking at the maps, it is
clearly
evident that the town underwent a number of dramatic
changes
.
Overall
, it is
notably
the construction of
many
buildings and facilities. In 2002, the shopping center
was constructed
in the north. There a number of trees
were planted
around the city. Nowadays, to the north-west of the area, trees
were chopped
down and replaced by news apartment and football stadium
was built
as a replacement for trees in the south-west.
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IELTS academic the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville

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  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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