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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following diagram shows how pencils are manufactured. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The following diagram shows how pencils are manufactured. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. GlVNw
The process of manufacturing pencils is demonstrated in this diagram. Overall, two capital parts forming a pencil namely pencil leads, and wooden covers are manufactured in two different processes and then assembled. The combination of ground graphite, clay and water called graphite dough is shifted to forming press in order to create graphite rods, which continue to be cut in pencil leads. Having dried, pencil leads are then fired in an oven under 800 Celsius degrees. With regards pencil cases, raw wood is processed into wooden slats with alternate grooves on surfaces by circular saw. In terms of assembly, decent leads are glued onto slots in a wooden slat followed by the placement of another empty wooden slat on top to mantle a sandwich of slats. In the last stage, shaping machine is operated to cut those sticked pencils into separately completed ones.
The process of manufacturing
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pencils
is demonstrated
in this diagram.

Overall
, two capital parts forming a
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pencil
namely
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pencil
leads, and wooden covers
are manufactured
in two
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different
processes and then assembled.

The combination of ground graphite, clay and water called graphite dough
is shifted
to forming press in order to create graphite rods, which continue to be
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cut
in
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pencil
leads. Having dried,
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pencil
leads are then fired in an oven under 800 Celsius degrees. With regards
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pencil
cases, raw wood
is processed
into wooden
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slats
with alternate grooves on surfaces by circular
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saw
.

In terms of assembly, decent leads
are glued
onto slots in a wooden
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slat
followed by the placement of another empty wooden
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slat
on top to mantle a sandwich of
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slats
. In the last stage, shaping machine
is operated
to
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cut
those
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sticked
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pencils
into
separately
completed ones.
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IELTS academic The following diagram shows how pencils are manufactured. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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  American English
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143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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