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The following chart shows the percentage of volientiors by organisations in Canada according to several categories report the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The following chart shows the percentage of volientiors by organisations in Canada according to several categories report the main features and make comparisons where relevant 8LdmP
These two pie charts depict the percentage of villages in Canada by environment in six different countries on organisation education by man and others in 2008 and six years later in 2014. The three greatest populations of Bulandshahr in 2008 was involved in the first Education physical environment and third art education of made up a quarter of investment in 2008 but they became less than fifth of total by 2014 however by 2014 the number significantly changed by environmental volunteering increased by 8% 22 29% that to other sectors decreased and became less popular in the and involvement in sport organisations the three smaller proportion of 2008 sports Healthcare and other two of the sectors sports and Healthcare increase in percentage in 2014 while other decreased the great change into ears given war involvement sports organisation with a 10% jump in popularity to make up a quarter of all voluntary involvement in Canada 2014
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