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The following chart illustrate reason for internet usage in the United Kingdom in the year

The following chart illustrate reason for internet usage in the United Kingdom in the year eR1MW
The given vertical bar graph depicts the information about the proportion of both sexes prefer to use internet due to several reason in the selected nation of UK by the year of 2001. Having a cursory glass, maximum male and female wants to consume network for sending the e-mail and the less proportion of both gender use the internet for commercial vendor in the given time period. Turning to details, under the 40% man spend the time on internet for games and it shows plummet trend in women category about 20%, a minor difference is seen in boys and girls who prefer to use the email for messages can be negligible.
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vertical bar graph depicts the information about the proportion of both sexes prefer to
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use
internet due to
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in the selected nation of UK by the year of 2001. Having a cursory glass, maximum male and female wants to consume network for sending the e-mail and the less proportion of both gender
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use
the internet for commercial vendor in the
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given
time period. Turning to
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details
, under the 40%
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man
spend the time on internet for games and it
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shows
plummet trend in women category about 20%, a minor difference is
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seen
in boys and girls who prefer to
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use
the email for messages can be negligible.

IELTS academic The following chart illustrate reason for internet usage in the United Kingdom in the year

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