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The following chart depicts the information about the trade of different kinds of items of a nation in 2015 and 2016. The quantity of goods sold has been changed in each category.

The following chart depicts the information about the trade of different kinds of items of a nation in 2015 and 2016. The quantity of goods sold has been changed in each category. QlknL
The following chart depicts the information about the trade of different kinds of items of a nation in 2015 and 2016. The quantity of goods sold has been changed in each category. 60 billion dollars had been earned by trading petroleum products in 2015 and it had been sold by 3% more in 2016 as compared to the last year. Similarly, engineered goods remained at the second position to trade their products with 58 billion dollars in 2015 and it also rose by 8. 5% in 2016. The country had profit by trading gems and jewellery with above 40 billions dollar in 2015 and the number of selling such items declined with 5% in the last year. Additionally, products related to agriculture had been sold by 30 billion dollars and it steadily remained the same in 2016 too with only 0. 81% difference. And textiles were sold at 25 billion dollars in 2015. But it increased dramatically by 15. 24% in 2016. As an overall summary, Petroleum products and engineered goods have been transported in the highest amount to another nation between two years. Agricultural products and textiles remain at the last position to sell their items.
The following chart depicts the information about the trade of
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different
kinds of items of a nation in 2015 and 2016. The quantity of
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goods
sold has been
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changed
in each category.

60
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billion
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dollars
had
been earned
by trading petroleum
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products
in 2015 and it had
been sold
by 3% more in 2016 as compared to the last year.
Similarly
, engineered
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goods
remained at the second position to trade their
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products
with 58
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billion
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dollars
in 2015 and it
also
rose by 8. 5% in 2016.

The country had profit by trading gems and
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jewellery
with above 40
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billions
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dollar
in 2015 and the number of selling such items declined with 5% in the last year.
Additionally
,
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products
related to agriculture had
been sold
by 30
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billion
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dollars
and it
steadily
remained the same in 2016 too with
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only
0. 81% difference. And textiles
were sold
at 25
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billion
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dollars
in 2015.
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But
it increased
dramatically
by 15. 24% in 2016.

As an
overall
summary, Petroleum
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products
and engineered
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goods
have
been transported
in the highest amount to another nation between two years. Agricultural
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products
and textiles remain at the last position to sell their items.
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IELTS academic The following chart depicts the information about the trade of different kinds of items of a nation in 2015 and 2016. The quantity of goods sold has been changed in each category.

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