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linegraph about books were read by boys or girls

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The line graph demonstrates HOW MANY BOOKS THAT FEMALE AND MALE STUDENTS/KIDS AT THE STARTMOUTH SCHOOL READ IN THE IBRARY OVER 3-YEAR PERIOD BETWEEN 2009 AND 2012. Overall, THE NUMBER OF BORROWED BOOKS BY both boys and girls increaseD over the yearS, AND boys read more books than girls GENERALLY. Having looked at the line graph in the first two years, it is obvious that the number of books borrowed by boys were always higher than girls. In 2009, BOYS CONSUMED ABOUT 50 BOOKS which were higher than THE FIGURE FOR girls by 20. A year later, the number of BOOKs THAT BOYS READ INCREASED SHARPLY BY 30 BOOKS. SIMILARLY, THE QUANTITY OF BOOKS THAT GIRLS ENJOYED AT THE LIBRARY ALSO ROSE SLIGHTLY FROM 30 TO 40. Having looked at the line graph in the next two years, It is clear that the number of books that girls comsumed were higher than boys. Book numbers which were read by girls reached a peak of 140 precisely after having soared in 2011. Book numbers which were enjoyed by boys saw/experienced/witnessed a slight decrease/drop or slightly decreased by 20 after peaking at 100.
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STARTMOUTH
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boys
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read
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books
than
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girls
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number
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books
borrowed by
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were always higher than
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girls
. In 2009,
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BOYS
CONSUMED ABOUT 50
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BOOKS
which were higher than THE FIGURE FOR
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girls
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GIRLS
ENJOYED AT THE LIBRARY
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SLIGHTLY
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comsumed
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IELTS academic linegraph about books were read by boys or girls

Academic
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3 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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