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The chart summarizes the admission average of successful applicants in three different programs (art, science and music) from the 1970s to the 2010s According to the green line of the chart, there was an increase of the percentage of applicants that were admitted to the science program during the years. Specifically, in the 1970s about 75% of the applicant could be admitted. Then, the percentage increased to 90% in the 2000s and remained at this level. The red line represent the music program and it shows a non-linear progression during the time. In the 1970s only the 60% of applicants were admitted, in the 1980s became the 90%, then about 75% in the 1990s, again 90% in the 2000s and in the 2010s dropped to about 65%. Lastly, the blue line of arts shows a decrease of about 5% from the 1970s (70%) to the 1980s (65%), then return to 70% in the 1990s and stay stable to the 2000s and finally, in 2010, there is another increase of 10% of admitted applicants.

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