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The map illustrates the changes that will take place in Islip town center.

The map illustrates the changes that will take place in Islip town center. mwWr
The map illustrates the changes that will take place in Islip town center. The most noticeable change is the replacement of the ways and adding new areas. To begin, there will be numerous changes in this town and the main change is that there are new vital areas in north Islip. Firstly, if we check the roads, we see that they want to create a new road system and remove some roads in the future. Besides, they planning to remove the old way, because it is pedestrians way in the future and essential for people. There have also been changes to the business sector in Islip. Consequently, The country prefers to create new shopping areas and earn some profit from these companies. The last little change is that create a new car park in the northeast of Islip. If we check the south side. we realize do not any big changes on this side. The residential landscape has also altered, particularly in the north of town. where create new essential areas for town population.
The map illustrates the
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changes
that will take place in
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Islip
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town
center. The most noticeable
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change
is the replacement of the ways and adding
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new
areas.

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begin
, there will be numerous
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changes
in this
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town
and the main
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change
is that there are
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new
vital areas in north
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Islip
.
Firstly
, if we
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check
the roads, we
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see
that they want to
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create
a
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new
road system and remove
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some
roads in the future.
Besides
,
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they planning
to remove the
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old
way,
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because
it is pedestrians way in the future and essential for
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people
.

There have
also
been
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changes
to the business sector in
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Islip
.
Consequently
, The country prefers to
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create
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new
shopping areas and earn
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some
profit from these
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companies
. The last
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little
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change
is that
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create
a
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new
car park in the northeast of
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Islip
.
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check
the south side.
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we
realize do not any
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big
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changes
on this side.

The residential landscape has
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altered,
particularly
in the north of
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town
.
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where
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create
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new
essential areas for
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town
population.
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IELTS academic The map illustrates the changes that will take place in Islip town center.

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174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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