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I would like to say how communication and technology useful to the present and future generations.

I would like to say how communication and technology useful to the present and future generations. In this essay we will discuss how Elon musk and other entrepreneur are changing the future. Firstly, the modern communication is booming the world like the Intel company is inventing so many communication devices like processors and controllers etc. The Amazon is getting more advancing in their products they are introducing Alexa and other gadgets in which the young and adult people are addicting into to that things. Google is also having the modern communication system on Google maps. Secondly, the Microsoft have there own data system in ocean to speed up there activities on global platform and also company are in the line there are implementing new technologies like in Artificial intelligence and also the Nissan and Tata motors are entering to Electric cars and also they are willing to more projects which will useful to the coming generations. Mostly, the Elon musk he is investing more money in spending space. He is sending rockets to the moon being an private entrepreneur without any help from public government. However, they are some people not addicting to the new technologies and spending their time on other things. They can have a bright future if they use their knowledge on this communication and technology. Hope the coming governments and schools with have their own principles to educate the people on right things.

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communication
 and technology useful to the present and future generations. In this essay we will discuss how If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Elon Musk
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 and other entrepreneur are changing the future. Firstly
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Secondly
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speed up
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 are in the line there are implementing new technologies like in Artificial intelligence and also
 the Nissan and If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Tata Motors
Tata motors
 are entering to Electric cars and also
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, the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Elon Musk
Elon musk
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use
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 and technology.

Hope the coming This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
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