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The bar graph gives information of sales of food in two months in a restaurant

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The given bar graph depicts the count of sales of food which a restaurant is served in distinct months. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the majority of the sales are seen in the last weeks of the July month, whereas in August, the more food is sold in first and second week. It can be inferred that in July's first week, the number of sales are 500 which is the lowest figure in this month. This number increased to 800 in second week. The number of sales of food rose sharply from 800 in week 1 to 900 in week 2. Moving further, there is a difference of 100 in the number of sales of food from 700 in July's third week to 600 in August's third week. The count of food's sale in week 4 is 900 and 800 in July and August, respectively.
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that the majority of the
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in the last
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of the July month, whereas in August, the more
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food
is sold
in
first
and second
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. It can
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, the
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sales
are 500 which is the lowest figure in this month. This
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increased to 800 in second
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week
. The
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number
of
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sales
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food
rose
sharply
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1 to 900 in
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2. Moving
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, there is a difference of 100 in the
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sales
of
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food
from 700 in July's third
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to 600 in August's third
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. The count of food's
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in
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4 is 900 and 800 in July and August,
respectively
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IELTS academic The bar graph gives information of sales of food in two months in a restaurant

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