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The flow chart shows the detailed process of using digital technology to produce digital pictures, including the role of digital camera, smart card, computer and finally the photo printer

The flow chart illustrates how to produce photographs by using technology gadget, including the role of digital camera, smart card, computer and finally printer. Overall, there are three steps in the process, which starts with capturing image or recording and ends with printing. First, an image, scene, digital pictures are captured or recorded by using a digital camera and stored in a smart card. In the second step, the digital image are downloaded into a computer where it will be edited by being cut, improved and formatted. Following this, the edited image is sent through via email or stored in a CD. Finally, the image is transmitted to a printer that has been added some photo paper into it and printed into color or black and white photos optionally.
The flow chart illustrates how to produce photographs by using technology gadget, including the role of digital camera, smart card, computer and
finally
printer.

Overall
, there are three steps in the process, which
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starts
with capturing
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image
or recording and ends with printing.

First
, an
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image
, scene, digital pictures
are captured
or recorded by using a digital camera and stored in a smart card. In the second step, the digital
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image
are downloaded
into a computer where it will
be edited
by being
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cut
,
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improved
and formatted. Following this, the edited
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image
is
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sent
through via email or stored in a CD.
Finally
, the
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image
is transmitted
to a printer that has been
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added
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some
photo paper into it and printed into color or black and white photos
optionally
.
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IELTS academic The flow chart shows the detailed process of using digital technology to produce digital pictures, including the role of digital camera, smart card, computer and finally the photo printer

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  American English
3 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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