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The diagram illustrates step by step approaches how a high school graduate can enroll into a university.

The diagram illustrates step by step approaches how a high school graduate can enroll into a university. Overall, any high school graduate can apply for a university admission, though they need to go through the administration who will decide whether to accept straight, accept provisionally, or reject the application. However, in case of both rejection and provisional acceptance, applicants have options to continue further with the application. Detailed enrollment procedure is discussed in the following paragraphs. Obtaining a high school graduation is the primary condition to apply for a university admission, but it might not be sufficient. The applicant might need further documents to proceed through final enrollment. If the applicant is accepted without further requirements, he/she can enroll straight away. Otherwise, the enrollment will depend on further documentations. Meanwhile, there is a possibility of rejection as well. If it is rejected, applicants may continue the application for alternative courses, otherwise the application will be canceled. Finally, a high school graduation is the primary condition for a university admission, though there are possibilities of acceptance, provisional acceptance and rejection with alternative course options
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high
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school
graduate can enroll into a university.

Overall
, any
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high
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graduate can
You can apply “for” a job or welfare, but you apply “to” a university.
apply for a university
admission, though they need to go through the administration who will decide whether to accept straight, accept
provisionally
, or reject the
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application
.
However
, in case of both rejection and provisional acceptance,
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applicants
have options to continue
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further
with the
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application
. Detailed enrollment procedure
is discussed
in the following paragraphs.

Obtaining a
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high
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school
graduation is the primary condition to
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apply for a university
admission,
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but
it might not be sufficient. The
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applicant
might need
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further
documents to proceed through final enrollment. If the
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applicant
is
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accepted
without
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further
requirements, he/she can enroll straight away.
Otherwise
, the enrollment will depend on
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further
documentations.

Meanwhile, there is a possibility of rejection
as well
. If it
is rejected
,
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applicants
may continue the
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application
for alternative courses,
otherwise
the
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application
will
be canceled
.
Finally
, a
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school
graduation is the primary condition for a university admission, though there are possibilities of acceptance, provisional acceptance and rejection with alternative course options
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates step by step approaches how a high school graduate can enroll into a university.

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6.0
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