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The flow chart outlines the four major aftermath of deforestation and the domino effects of each consequence on the ecosystem.

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The flow chart outlines the four major aftermath of deforestation and the domino effects of each consequence on the ecosystem. Interestingly, some results of deforestation have the same causation on the specific aspect of the environment. Generally, the flow chart states that the compression of hefty logging appliances on the soil; having lesser roots to prevent soil erosion; the higher chance of wildfire breaking out whether deliberately or accidentally and lastly, lesser moisture is returned to the atmosphere by the plants. Respectively, logging machines press down the soil and this turns the soil to be hardened and compact; in turn resulting flood as the soil can no longer absorbs the rain water. The followings all impact on the stability of the biodiversity; however, this is achieved by different means. Matters of fewer roots resulting soil erosion; wildfire destroys the leftover woods from logging and thus the disappearance of microorganisms that depend on waste; return of lesser moisture in air makes lesser precipitation and brings about longer duration of drought, threatened the vegetation and allows the pioneer species to grow. This whole situation is responsible for the loss of biodiversity greatly.
The flow chart outlines the four major aftermath of deforestation and the domino effects of each consequence on the ecosystem.
Interestingly
,
some
results of deforestation have the same causation on the specific aspect of the environment.

Generally
, the flow chart states that the compression of hefty logging appliances on the
soil
; having
lesser
roots to
prevent
soil
erosion; the higher chance of wildfire breaking out whether
deliberately
or
accidentally
and
lastly
,
lesser
moisture
is returned
to the atmosphere by the plants.
Respectively
, logging machines press down the
soil
and this turns the
soil
to
be hardened
and compact; in turn resulting flood as the
soil
can no longer absorbs the rain water.

The followings all impact on the stability of the biodiversity;
however
, this
is achieved
by
different
means. Matters of fewer roots resulting
soil
erosion; wildfire
destroys
the leftover woods from logging and
thus
the disappearance of microorganisms that depend on waste; return of
lesser
moisture in air
makes
lesser
precipitation and brings about longer duration of drought, threatened the vegetation and
allows
the pioneer species to grow. This whole situation is responsible for the loss of biodiversity
greatly
.
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