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The flow chart illustrates the process of making bread with the help of the machines

The flow chart illustrates the process of making bread with the help of the machines 12gM

The flow chart illustrates the industrial process of bread production. This process involves three key stages: mixing the ingredients, then dough fermentation, and finally dividing the dough. First of all, in order to make dough, the ingredients have to be mixed. Flour, water and yeast are the basic ingredients for the bread, and they are poured into the industrial mixer. After that, the mixture has to go through the fermentation process. The dough can be fermented naturally, or by adding additives. When the fermentation is over, the dough is ready. The final stage of the process shown would be dividing the dough. In order to do that, industrials use machine called divider that has a plunger, which pushes dough to the rotating cylinder. The dough is divided into pre-determined weights, so that bread loaves weight equally. At the end, the bread goes to conveyor belt, which is the final phase of the process shown.

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