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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. GxeQ
This picture shows five different stages how fuzzy drinks are produced before arriving at a supermarket. Overall, there are three stages until water is turned into carbonated drinks and two stages for their packing and delivery. In stage 1, raw water is delivered to a point for adding water softner and chamicals through a filter. Then, the water is pumped up, pass electric heaters, and delivered to a container, in which carbon dioxide are added. The original water is turned into carbonated water here in stage 2. After this stage, stage 3 is for mixing. The carbonated water is put in a mixing tank. In the tank, three items; colouring, syrup and flavour, are added into the carbonated water. Finishing adding these, the fuzzy drink are filtered. The drink are sorted to bottled and canned drinks in stage 4 before packing the drinks into a box for delivering to supermakets in stage 5.
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different
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stages
how fuzzy
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drinks
are produced
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before
arriving at a supermarket.
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, there are three
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until
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is turned
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carbonated
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drinks
and two
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stages
for their packing and delivery.

In
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stage
1, raw
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water
is delivered
to a point for adding
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water
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softner
and
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chamicals
through a filter.

Then, the
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water
is pumped
up, pass electric heaters, and delivered to a container, in which carbon dioxide are
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added
. The original
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water
is turned
into
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carbonated
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water
here in
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stage
2.

After this
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,
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3 is for mixing. The
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carbonated
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water
is put
in a mixing tank. In the tank, three items;
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colouring
, syrup and
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flavour
, are
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added
into the
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carbonated
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water
. Finishing adding these, the fuzzy
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drink
are filtered
.

The
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drink
are sorted
to bottled and canned
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drinks
in
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stage
4
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before
packing the
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drinks
into a box for delivering to
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supermakets
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5.
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IELTS academic The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
153 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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