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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. glPL
The graph illustrates the number of students who ended their university studies in Canada in the period from 1992 to 2007. Overall, it is clear that the majority of students who have accived theirs university graduendion were females. In addiction, another noticeable trand could be seen in the similar fluctuation of the lines, indeed famale and male has reached theirs pecks and falls in the same years. Women line describe an increasing andament during the years. In fact, has started with approximately 100, 000 graduates and has rised around an half more of the staring number in 2007. From 1992 to 2000 the increase was steadily around 100, 000, but subsequently during the follow years the amount has rocketed. The other line show that a fewer number of male get gradueted, even if the number has gone up during the years they were not able to reach the lower number of famele graduates. During the first year they were slightly over 70, 000, the sum has rised modestly with some pecks in 1995 and in 2000. Then the couve has started to growth reaching in 2007 almost 100, 000.
The graph illustrates the
number
of students who ended their university studies in Canada in the period from 1992 to 2007.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the majority of students who have
accived
theirs university
graduendion
were females. In addiction, another noticeable
trand
could be
seen
in the similar fluctuation of the lines,
indeed
famale
and male has reached theirs pecks and falls in the same years.

Women line
describe
an increasing
andament
during the years. In fact, has
started
with approximately 100, 000 graduates and has
rised
around
an
half more of the staring
number
in 2007. From 1992 to 2000 the increase was
steadily
around 100, 000,
but
subsequently
during the follow years the amount has rocketed.

The other line
show
that a fewer
number
of male
get
gradueted
, even if the
number
has gone up during the years they were not able to reach the lower
number
of
famele
graduates. During the
first
year
they were
slightly
over 70, 000, the sum has
rised
modestly
with
some
pecks in 1995 and in 2000. Then the
couve
has
started
to growth reaching in 2007 almost 100, 000.
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