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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. eamG

The provided graph demonstrates the utilize of fish and other various spices of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004. The unit was measured by grams Overall, the proportion of chichken started from lower point than other meat kinds, reaching to its highest while beef and lamb declined dramatically. The chicken was used a bit lower than 150, Moreover several fluctuations were observed during the given period, reaching to 200 grams in 1989. The figure shows that it reached the peak in 2004, amounting to 250 grams. Beef using started at around 220, however there was a sudden decrease. The indicator illustrates another unexpected change, so it went up to higher than begining and maintained 240. 230 grams beef was consumed in 1989. The other five years the amountings reduced and stayed at 100 in 2004. An amount of lamb consisted of 150 in 1979, furthermore it droped 50 grams after ten years. Ups and downs followed each other till the end, equal to over 50. Fish constituted 70 grams in 1979 and there was not a considerable change and it went down only 20 grams after 25 years

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