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The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market. XLer
The diagram illustrates the process of monitoring and labelling shellfish so that it is prepared for the international market. In the beginning, fisherman use GPS location device on their boats in order to catch shellfish. This device is automatically sending signal to the satellite, so that workers in Santiago can monitor the catch. The next stage would be labelling, where the shellfish catch is labeled with a barcode. This is done in order that the shellfish is certified, which makes it elligible for the market. After this, shellfish is sent to processing plant, so that the final product is made and prepared for shipping. Now that shellfish’s quality is checked and verified for consumption, the final stage can begin. Finally, the transportation system, consisting of trucks and planes, is used to make the shellfish available on both local and international market. Though this process, shellfish after the catch undergoes the labeling, processing and transportation, so as to be sure its safe for final use by the consumers all around the world.
The diagram illustrates the process of monitoring and labelling
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shellfish
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so
that it
is prepared
for the international market.

In the beginning, fisherman
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use
GPS location device on their boats in order to
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catch
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shellfish
. This device is
automatically
sending signal to the satellite,
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so
that workers in Santiago can monitor the
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catch
. The
next
stage would be labelling, where the
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shellfish
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catch
is labeled
with a barcode. This
is done
in order that the
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shellfish
is certified
, which
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makes
it
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elligible
for the market.

After this,
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shellfish
is
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sent
to processing plant,
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so
that the final product
is made
and prepared for shipping.
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Now
that
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shellfish’s
quality is
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checked
and verified for consumption, the final stage can
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begin
.
Finally
, the transportation system, consisting of trucks and
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planes
, is
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used
to
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make
the
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shellfish
available on both local and international market.

Though this process,
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shellfish
after the
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catch
undergoes the labeling, processing and transportation,
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so as to
be sure its safe for final
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use
by the consumers all around the world.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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