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The diagram below shows the number of landline ownership telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year period. v. 3

The diagram below shows the number of landline ownership telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year period. v. 3 YY7N

Depicted the chart is the information about how a number of people (per 1000) owned landline telephone in nine various countries over a half decade, since 2000. Overall, it can be seen that the general trend was for the ownership of landline telephone in all countries relatively to decrease during the period. Meanwhile, the figure in Singapore was the highest throughout the time scale. In 2000, there were the two highest figures for landline telephone owners in Singapore and Brunei, standing at merely over 450 –the maximum recorded- and merely under 250 severally. This was followed by Philippines and Thailand, which had a similar level, with merely under 100. Meanwhile, the number of people owning landline telephone in Indonesia, Vietnam, Cambodia, Lao PDR, and Myanmar was under 50. After 2000, the level of people having landline telephone in Singapore, Philippines, Myanmar, and Lao PDR experienced a slight decrease, dropping to around 450, 50, and 0 consecutively at the end of period. Only after the figure in Brunei increased to 250 (2002), the level then to drop to around 230 (2004), while Thailand and Indonesia experienced an enormous fall to 0 by 2004. By contrast, there was a gradual decline in Cambodia and Vietnam, rising to 50 and merely above 50 each.

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owned
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telephone
 in nine various countries over a half decade, since 2000.

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 that the general trend was for the ownership of landline You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphonedialcontactcall up
telephone
 in all countries relatively
 to decrease during the period. Meanwhile, the figure in Singapore was the highest throughout the time scale.

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 over 450 –the maximum recorded- and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurelyonlysimplysolelyhardly
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 under 250 severally
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 and Thailand, which had a similar level, with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurelyonlysimplysolelyhardly
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 under 100. Meanwhile, the number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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, and Myanmar was under 50.

After 2000, the level of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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telephone
 in Singapore, Philippines, Myanmar, and Lao Possible spelling mistake found.DrPerPRParDDRGDR
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 experienced a slight decrease, dropping to around 450, 50, and 0 consecutively
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 after the figure in Brunei increased to 250 (2002), the level then to drop to around 230 (2004), while Thailand and Indonesia experienced an enormous fall to 0 by 2004. By contrast, there was a gradual decline in Cambodia and Vietnam, rising to 50 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurelyonlysimplysolelyhardly
merely
 above 50 each. 