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The maps below show the village of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparison where relevant

The maps below show the village of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. 8rqr
The illustration explained the previous design of stokeford town in 1930 and 2010. Overall, there are two maps given, one showing the old design of the village and another, developmental changes that has taken place in the same place in the 2 different decades. Firstly, stokeford is found at the eastern part of the river stoke intersecting by a bridge that connects into the town from the north. In 1930, farmland was so prominent then. Similarly, both diagrams have structures that remains unchanged ie the post office, bridge and primary school. Inaddition, the village had very few buildings, trees, bushes and garden. In 2010, there was a dramatical changes shown which includes, new constructed houses at farmland locations, removal shops and additional structures erected, more roads created within the village. Furthermore, the primary school area is now expanded adding more buildings, then the garden site reconstructed as well now containing living homes as well as retirement home
The illustration
explained
the previous design of
stokeford
town in 1930 and 2010.

Overall
, there are two maps
given
, one showing the
old
design of the village and another, developmental
changes
that has taken place in the same place in the 2
different
decades.

Firstly
,
stokeford
is found
at the eastern part of the river stoke intersecting by a bridge that connects into the town from the north. In 1930, farmland was
so
prominent then.
Similarly
, both diagrams have structures that remains unchanged
ie
the post office, bridge and primary school.
Inaddition
, the village had
very
few buildings, trees, bushes and garden.

In 2010, there was a
dramatical
changes
shown which includes, new constructed
houses
at farmland locations, removal shops and additional structures erected, more roads created within the village.
Furthermore
, the primary school area is
now
expanded adding more buildings, then the garden site reconstructed
as well
now
containing living homes
as well
as retirement home
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IELTS academic The maps below show the village of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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