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The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. WJbK

The diagram presents the process of transformation rainwater in drinking water in an Australian town. Overall, the whole process is divided into five stages: drain, water filter, storage, water treatment, water intake, respectively. The whole process is made with limited engaged human labour. The first and last phases take place partly on and underground, while middle phases are hold fully underground. Firstly, rain flows to a gutter, which is connected with a drain system. Then, rainwater flows to a water filter via an underground system of pipes. Rainwater is cleaned from the first dirt by the water filter. Then, pre-cleaned water is retained in a storage until it can be provided to the water’s treatment phase. During the next step, water is purificationed by chemicals. Afterwards, a hydraulic system provides crystal clear water to the house. The tap is use for drawing water by household’s members, who are end-users of drinking water.

The diagram presents the process of transformation rainwater in drinking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in an Australian town.

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, the whole process is divided
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water
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water
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water
 intake, respectively
. The whole process is made
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labour
. The first
 and last phases take place partly on and underground, while middle phases are hold fully
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Firstly
, rain flows to a gutter, which is connected
 with a drain system. Then, rainwater flows to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 filter via an underground system of pipes. Rainwater is cleaned
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 dirt by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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pre-cleaned
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water
is retained
 in a storage until it can be provided
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water’s
 treatment phase. During the next
 step, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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purificationed
 by chemicals. Afterwards, a hydraulic system provides crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
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water
 to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. The tap is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for drawing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 by household’s members, who are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
-users of drinking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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