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The flow chart below shows the recycling procedure of glass bottles.

The flow chart below shows the recycling procedure of glass bottles. jR5wa
The flow chart illustrates the stages of recycling process of glass bottles. Overall, it is evident that the given process is man made process and it includes seven steps starting from collecting glass bottles from public to creation of new bottles. Looking at the details, in first step, glass bottles are collected from public and separated in three different category namely green, brown and Clea colors. After that, it is transported to processing plant and it is also classified as metal cap and plastic cap which are removed. In the next step, the glass is broken and this broken glass is transported to glass factory by car where there is a furnace where glass and other raw materials are mixed and heated at 1200 degree C. Moreover, this melted mixture is then used to make new bottles.
The flow chart illustrates the stages of recycling process of
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glass
bottles.

Overall
, it is evident that the
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given
process is
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man
made process and it includes seven steps starting from collecting
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glass
bottles from public to creation of new bottles.

Looking at the
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details
, in
first
step,
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glass
bottles
are collected
from public and separated in three
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different
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category
namely
green, brown and
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Clea
colors. After that, it
is transported
to processing plant and it is
also
classified as metal cap and plastic cap which
are removed
.

In the
next
step, the
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glass
is broken
and this broken
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glass
is transported
to
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glass
factory by car where there is a furnace where
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glass
and other raw materials
are mixed
and heated at 1200 degree C.
Moreover
, this melted mixture is then
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used
to
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make
new bottles.
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IELTS academic The flow chart below shows the recycling procedure of glass bottles.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
137 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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