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the chart below shows the result of survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in Australian cities

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The given bar chart illustrates the study of consuming coffee and tea in five different cities in Australia over time period of a month. It is noticeable that the most people like to go out in cafe to have coffee or tea. Whilst less likely people prefer to buy fresh coffee. Significant amount of people (almost 49% in Adelaide to 63% in Melbourne) like to go in cafe to have coffee and tea in spite of buying and making at home. It is interesting that trend of going in cafe has difference in all four city however it is the highest preferable option. People of Melbourne, Hobart and Sydney have the maximum number of residents going to the cafe which makes it 63%, 62% and 61%. However, trend of buying instant coffee (least 46% in Sydney and highest 54% in Hobart) is people’s second option and buying fresh coffee (minimum 34% in Brisbane and maximum 44% in Sydney) is the least acceptable option. Overall, residents of Australia prefer going out of cafe the most and buying coffee and tea is not their major concern.
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different
cities in Australia over time period of a month. It is noticeable that the most
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people
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people
prefer to
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fresh coffee.

Significant amount of
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people
(almost 49% in Adelaide to 63% in Melbourne) like to go in
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cafe
to have
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coffee
and
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tea
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in spite of
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buying
and making at home. It is interesting that trend of going in
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cafe
has difference in all four city
however
it is the highest preferable option.
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People
of Melbourne, Hobart and Sydney have the maximum number of residents going to the
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cafe
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it 63%, 62% and 61%.

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instant
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(least 46% in Sydney and highest 54% in Hobart) is
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second option and
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buying
fresh
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coffee
(minimum 34% in Brisbane and maximum 44% in Sydney) is the least acceptable option.

Overall
, residents of Australia prefer going out of
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cafe
the most and
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buying
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and
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is not their major concern.
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