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The chart and the graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.

The chart and the graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. kYenR

The pie chart compares the percentage of sales for Coca-Cola for five different regions in 2000 while the line graph illustrates of share price during the period of six years. Overall, according to the pie chart, the percentage of Coca-Cola sold in North America was the highest, the opposite was true for Africa and Middle east. Meanwhile, the amount of Coca-Cola share price increased significantly. As can be seen from the chart, a fourth of Coca-Cola was sold on Latin America, which was followed by 16, 4% and 20, 5% in Asia and Europe respectively. North America had the highest figure with 30, 4%. The proportion of Coca-Cola consumed in Africa and Middle East was the lowest with only 7%. In 1996, the number of Coca-Cola share price was 40 dollars. After that, this figure witnessed a fluctuation, before reaching its peak in 1998 with 80 dollars. During the next two years, the number of Coca-Cola price decreased to the lowest point at under 50 dollars but fluctuated to nearly 60 dollars at the end of the period.

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