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The flow chart below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture given describes the structure of an automatic photo booth where people, going inside, can obtain photos for official documents, special occasions and also for fun. Overall, it is a small spot which you could find around the city made with a interior camera and a small room where the people can sit. At first, we could see the front side including to the right the instructions guide, the payment spot and the hole where the photos taken are delivered within 60 seconds. To the left, we could find the little room where the person is supposed to enter with a curtain that must be closed when the shots are taken. Then, inside the small room we have an adjustable stool which has to be regulated depending on the person height, in order to have a good face angle in the pictures. If the person sit on the stool, moreover, he could see a mirror in front of him allowing the last face adjustments before the shots. Furthermore, on the same side, the structure provides a light flash signal near the camera, making sure the person is ready where the photos are taken.
The picture
given
describes
the structure of an automatic
photo
booth where
people
, going inside, can obtain
photos
for official documents, special occasions and
also
for fun.
Overall
, it is a
small
spot which you could find around the city made with
a
interior camera and a
small
room where the
people
can sit.

At
first
, we could
see
the front side including to the right the instructions guide, the payment spot and the hole where the
photos
taken
are delivered
within 60 seconds. To the
left
, we could find the
little
room where the
person
is supposed
to enter with a curtain that
must
be closed
when the shots
are taken
. Then, inside the
small
room we have an adjustable stool which
has to
be regulated
depending on the
person
height, in order to have a
good
face angle in the pictures. If the
person
sit on the stool,
moreover
, he could
see
a mirror in front of him allowing the last face adjustments
before
the shots.
Furthermore
, on the same side, the structure provides a light flash signal near the camera, making sure the
person
is ready where the
photos
are taken
.
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IELTS academic The flow chart below shows an automatic photo booth.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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