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The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart illustrates the main reason behind the of phones by adolescents within the period of four years, between 2016 and 2019. This information was gotten from the research done in an African country. From the chart we could deduce that the most significant reason for the use of mobile phones within the stipulated period for the teens to be to access the social networks. This was confirmed by the higher percentage teens affirming that they use their phones for social networking in 2016, 2017, 2018, and 2019; which gives the 50%, 48%, 51%, and 56% respectively. However, it could be concluded from the findings that lower percentage of young adults use their phones for digital camera which is indicated by the lower percentages of 10%, 13%, 11%, and 5% in the years 2016, 2017, 2018, and 2019 respectively. In conclusion, it could be deduced that a larger percentage of young adults use their phones mostly for social networking than for Emailing, digital camera or phone calls.
The chart illustrates the main reason behind the of
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phones
by adolescents within the period of four years, between 2016 and 2019. This information
was gotten
from the research done in an African country.

From the chart we could deduce that the most significant reason for the
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use
of mobile
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phones
within the stipulated period for the teens to be to access the social networks. This
was confirmed
by the higher
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percentage
teens affirming that they
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use
their
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phones
for social networking in 2016, 2017, 2018, and 2019; which gives the 50%, 48%, 51%, and 56%
respectively
.

However
, it could
be concluded
from the findings that lower
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percentage
of young adults
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phones
for digital camera which
is indicated
by the lower
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percentages
of 10%, 13%, 11%, and 5% in the years 2016, 2017, 2018, and 2019
respectively
.

In conclusion
, it could
be deduced
that a larger
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percentage
of young adults
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phones
mostly
for social networking than for Emailing, digital camera or
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phone
calls.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

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4 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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