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The chart below show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the part of united kingdom's varsity pupils located in their home country were capabled to talk by other languages more than English in the years 2000 as well as 2010. From the statistical analysis, however, in the both of the years extreme percentage was 30% and 35% for Spanish language solely they could use, but in the starting year of that millenium the second maximum british students not spoke by other languages (20%). In contrast, German language was the alike percentage in the both of the years, that is 10%. The information depicts, nevertheless, in the year 2010 Frence, German and no other language were the similar percentage (10%), in the year 2000, German and two other languages utilized by the british students same. In conclusion, moreover, in the couple of the times another languages were used in approximately same percentage, that is 15% in 2000 and by boosted 5% it was became 20% in 2010.
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2010
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IELTS academic The chart below show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

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