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The two maps below show Paradise island in the past and now.

The two maps below show Paradise island in the past and now. lLQPX

The two maps represent the Paradise island in the past and now. Overall there are multiple choice of alternates nowadays, and old stations are recreated by builders. In the past, only trees were planted, while now instead of trees, there open restaurant, BBQ area and cycle path are created. A few years ago there was scientific research station, whereas now swimming pool is built instead of scientific research station to the north-west of the island. Clearly looking at the map of the past, there were limited Pier and boat. However Pier is expanded and boat is developed in cruise ship. We can see, Hotel complex is changed instead of scientific research station to the south-west of the square. Besides, swimming permitted scenic lookout and Cafe are discovered. So, it can be observed that the Paradise island changed and developed from past to now.

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. Overall
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past
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now
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station
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now
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station
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past
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see
, Hotel complex is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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Cafe
are discovered
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, it can be observed
 that the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Paradise Island
Paradise island
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 and developed from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
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now
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