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The first two graphs give the data about the amount of fruit produced in tonnes and also the amount of fertilizer used in tonnes.

The first two graphs give the data about the amount of fruit produced in tonnes and also the amount of fertilizer used in tonnes. 8gn3x
The first two graphs give the data about the amount of fruit produced in tonnes and also the amount of fertilizer used in tonnes. The second graph compares the volume of rainfall in 2013 from the period of January to December. These units are measured in millimeters. Overall, it can be seen that the month most used fertilizer was more likely to happen more rainfall, and by contrast, it produced the least fruit among 12 months when both fertilizer used and rainfall were around their highest point. Starting with fruit production, the production rose steadily from just over 2 tonnes in January until it reached a peak of 4. 2 tonnes in August. Then, it fell constantly to around 2 tonnes in December. However, turning to the usage of fertilizers, it appeared a controversial graph. The highest amount of fertilizer, just under 1 tonne, was used in April, following the noticeable decline to zero in June and July. Fertilizer consumption then increased in winter months, rising to a total of around 0. 7 tonnes in November before dipping to just below 0. 5 tonnes at year end. Regarding rainfall, it appeared as a reflection of fertilizer employed. It started with 12 mm in January, then reached the highest point of 16 mm in February. Following, it decreased consistently to 4mm in July and leveled out for 3 months. Again, rainfall increased steadily to reach 14mm in December.
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first
two graphs give the data about the amount of fruit produced in tonnes and
also
the amount of
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fertilizer
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used
in tonnes. The second graph compares the volume of
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rainfall
in 2013 from the period of January to December. These units
are measured
in millimeters.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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month
most
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used
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fertilizer
was more likely to happen more
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rainfall
, and by contrast, it produced the least fruit among 12
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months
when both
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fertilizer
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used
and
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rainfall
were around their highest point.

Starting with fruit production, the production rose
steadily
from
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just
over 2 tonnes in January until it reached a peak of 4. 2 tonnes in August. Then, it fell
constantly
to around 2 tonnes in December.
However
, turning to the usage of
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fertilizers
, it appeared a controversial graph. The highest amount of
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fertilizer
,
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just
under 1 tonne, was
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used
in April, following the noticeable decline to zero in June and July.
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Fertilizer
consumption then increased in winter
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months
, rising to a total of around 0. 7 tonnes in November
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before
dipping to
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just
below 0. 5 tonnes at year
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end
.

Regarding
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rainfall
, it appeared as a reflection of
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fertilizer
employed. It
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started
with 12 mm in January, then reached the highest point of 16 mm in February. Following, it decreased
consistently
to
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4mm
in July and leveled out for 3
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months
. Again,
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rainfall
increased
steadily
to reach
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14mm
in December.
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