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The two maps show changes to the Arts Center of Colwick between 2005 and today.

The two maps show changes to the Arts Center of Colwick between 2005 and today. kewK8

We can see the A rts C enter made many changes during this period, including new building constructed and outdoor facilities. In the past, there was an empty wasteland outside the Centre. Today we can see the C entre expanded new facilities, in addition, it made main features central exhibition area indoor and outdoor. The concept hall was moved to the gallery 1 and 2 area, on the other hand cinema new location is top of the left-hand side of concept hall and they become smaller. There were two galleries in the right of the map, at the present they are combined and moved to the left of the map. The information desk was in the same location. The meeting room was removed in the top left-hand side of map and they made two new building meeting room there. The snack bar was removed to the bottom left-hand side of the map, behind of gallery and it changed the name of café. A new building is created between of cinema and meeting room 1 is called drama studio. Wasteland, in the bottom of the map become outdoor exhibition and performance area, a lot of plant, trees and stage add to it. The central exhibition area is located center of the map. So, it is clear that the c olwick a rt c entre is more main feature and developed from 2005 to today.

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