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The charts give information about the tonnage of friuts produced in a farm per month,quantity of fertilizers used and rainfall per month in 2013

The charts give information about the tonnage of friuts produced in a farm per month, quantity of fertilizers used and rainfall per month in 2013 LwWP1

The charts give information about the tonnage of friuts produced in a farm per month, quantity of fertilizers used and rainfall per month in 2013. We can see that the weight of fruit produced increased from around 2 tons in January to about 4. 2 tons in September. After that it dropped rapidly to about 2 tons of fruit produced in December. Regarding to the mass of fertilizers used, it started off at 0. 5 ton at Janurary and rose steadily to almost 1 ton in march and then declined to zero at May, June and July. After that, inclined slowly to 0. 6tons at November and decreased a bit at December. As for rainfall, it is a bit similar to fertilizer used with its 12mm and 16 mm at Janurary and Feburary respectively and went down to 4mm from July to September and them levelled up steadily to 14mm at December. In summary, the farm provided more fruit when there were less rainfell and fertilizers used.

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 that the weight of fruit produced increased from around 2 tons in January to about 4. 2 tons in September. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Janurary
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march
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Feburary
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4mm
 from July to September and them levelled up steadily
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14mm
 at December. In summary, the farm provided more fruit when there were less Possible spelling mistake found.rainfallrain fell
rainfell
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fertilizers
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. 