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The first graph illustrates the quantity of fruit production and the use of fertilizer by a farm on a regular monthly basis all over the year 2013,while the second graph shows the amount of rainfall in the mentioned year

The first graph illustrates the quantity of fruit production and the use of fertilizer by a farm on a regular monthly basis all over the year 2013, while the second graph shows the amount of rainfall in the mentioned year pJV62
The first graph illustrates the quantity of fruit production and the use of fertilizer by a farm on a regular monthly basis all over the year 2010, while the second graph shows the amount of rainfall in the mentioned year. Overall, it is clear that the fruit production has an inverse relationship with the rainfall received, whereas it has an insignificant relation with the amount of fertilizer. As per the charts, during the first four months of the year, when there is a significant amount of rainfall (between 10 to 16 mm), the fruit production is fixed around 2. 5 tones. That is much less than the next five months. Between may and September fruit production dramatically increase and this is from 2. 5 to 4. 25 tones. In the last three months of year, rainfall becomes heavy again, whereas the production fall sharply to reach 2 tones by December. On the other hand the amount use of fertilizer is almost not effective on the amount of production. It means only an exact amount of fertilizer is needed which is nearly 0/5 tones per month.
The
first
graph illustrates the quantity of
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use
of fertilizer by a farm on a regular monthly basis all over the year 2010, while the second graph
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shows
the
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amount
of
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rainfall
in the mentioned year.

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, it is
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clear
that the
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fruit
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production
has an inverse relationship with the
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rainfall
received, whereas it has an insignificant relation with the
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amount
of fertilizer.

As per the charts, during the
first
four
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months
of the year, when there is a significant
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amount
of
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rainfall
(
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fruit
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production
is
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fixed
around 2. 5
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tones
.
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much less than the
next
five
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months
. Between may and September
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fruit
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production
dramatically
increase and this is from 2. 5 to 4. 25
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tones
. In the last three
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months
of year,
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rainfall
becomes heavy again, whereas the
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production
fall
sharply
to reach 2
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tones
by December.

On the other hand
the
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amount
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use
of fertilizer is almost not effective on the
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of
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production
. It means
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only
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amount
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is needed
which is
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0/5
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tones
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IELTS academic The first graph illustrates the quantity of fruit production and the use of fertilizer by a farm on a regular monthly basis all over the year 2013, while the second graph shows the amount of rainfall in the mentioned year

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