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The first chart shows the population of England and Wales and second chart show the birth rate and death rate between 1700 and 2000

The first chart shows the population of England and Wales and second chart show the birth rate and death rate between 1700 and 2000 pqrm
Report is being written about the information of the population and child birth and mortality rate in England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Overall, the two bar chats depicts the population which following increasing Trend as well as birth rate and death rate per 1000 as compared to death rate birth rate is higher in all years. In the first bar chart depicts the growth of population nearby 10 million in first given year the population of England and Wales faced a quick increased from 15 million to 50 million between 1800 and 2000. Further more, the birth rate of England and Wales 2 per thousand higher than death rate in first given year 1700. Moreover, after 10 year a dramatica increase faced by birth rate and death rate of England and Wales almost 25 per 1000and approximately 18per 1000 respectively after two decades following Dawdle trend and it was reached at 10 par 1000and 5 per 1000 orderly till last given Year 2000.
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being written
about the information of the
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population
and child
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birth
and mortality
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rate
in England and Wales from 1700 to 2000.
Overall
, the two bar chats depicts the
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population
which following increasing Trend
as well
as
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birth
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rate
and death
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rate
per 1000 as compared to death
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rate
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birth
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rate
is higher in all years. In the
first
bar chart depicts the growth of
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population
nearby 10 million in
first
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given
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year
the
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population
of England and Wales faced a quick increased from 15 million to 50 million between 1800 and 2000.
Further
more, the
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birth
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rate
of England and Wales 2 per thousand higher than death
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rate
in
first
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given
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year
1700.
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, after 10
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a
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dramatica
increase faced by
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birth
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rate
and death
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rate
of England and Wales almost 25 per 1000and approximately 18per 1000
respectively
after two decades following Dawdle trend and it
was reached
at 10 par 1000and 5 per 1000 orderly till last
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given
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Year
2000.
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IELTS academic The first chart shows the population of England and Wales and second chart show the birth rate and death rate between 1700 and 2000

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