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The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. q3Mr
The given diagram depicts the process of manufacturing bricks in various stages for the construction. The first step to initiate the process of making bricks is dig the Clay with the help of a digger. Next pour the Clay with a metal grid on the roller and mix the sand and water. After that pour the mixture in the mould and when the bricks are ready cut with a wire cutter in the shape of brick. In the next step when the bricks are ready then they are kept in the oven for dry for maximum 24 to 48 hours. After that it's kept in the kiln first in moderate temperature(200-980°c) then in high temperature (870-1300°c) for drying properly. When bricks dry completely then keep in the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. At last it goes for packing and delivery to consumers. Overall, it is vivid that manufacturing bricks takes a long process.
The
given
diagram depicts the process of manufacturing
bricks
in various stages for the construction.

The
first
step to initiate the process of making
bricks
is dig the Clay with the
help
of a digger.
Next
pour the Clay with a metal grid on the roller and mix the sand and water. After that pour the mixture in the
mould
and when the
bricks
are ready
cut
with a wire cutter in the shape of brick.

In the
next
step when the
bricks
are ready then they are
kept
in the oven for dry for maximum 24 to 48 hours. After that it's
kept
in the kiln
first
in moderate temperature(200-980°c) then in high temperature (870-1300°c) for drying
properly
. When
bricks
dry completely then
keep
in the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. At
last it
goes for packing and delivery to consumers.

Overall
, it is vivid that manufacturing
bricks
takes a long process.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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