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The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. q3Mr

The given diagram depicts the process of manufacturing bricks in various stages for the construction. The first step to initiate the process of making bricks is dig the Clay with the help of a digger. Next pour the Clay with a metal grid on the roller and mix the sand and water. After that pour the mixture in the mould and when the bricks are ready cut with a wire cutter in the shape of brick. In the next step when the bricks are ready then they are kept in the oven for dry for maximum 24 to 48 hours. After that it's kept in the kiln first in moderate temperature(200-980°c) then in high temperature (870-1300°c) for drying properly. When bricks dry completely then keep in the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. At last it goes for packing and delivery to consumers. Overall, it is vivid that manufacturing bricks takes a long process.

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given
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bricks
 in various stages for the construction.

The first
 step to initiate the process of making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 is dig the Clay with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of a digger. Next
 pour the Clay with a metal grid on the roller and mix the sand and water. After that pour the mixture in the Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
 and when the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are ready This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 with a wire cutter in the shape of brick.

In the next
 step when the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are ready then they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in the oven for dry for maximum 24 to 48 hours. After that it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in the kiln first
 in moderate temperature(200-980°c) then in high temperature (870-1300°c) for drying properly
. When You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 dry completely then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. At The comma is probably missing here: "last, it".last, it
last it
 goes for packing and delivery to consumers.

Overall
, it is vivid that manufacturing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 takes a long process. 

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

Academic

American English

4 paragraphs

155 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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