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The first chart below shows the value of goods that Australia imported from China and those exported to China from Australia. The second chart shows the types of goods imported from China. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the value of goods that Australia imported from China and those exported to China from Australia. The second chart shows the types of goods imported from China. AjJQN
The bar chart illustrates information about the cost of merchandise that Australia imported from China exporting to China from Australia between 6 years from 1998 to 2004, While The second chart compares the sort of goods imported between China 2003 and 2004. It is clear that there was an upward trend in the value of goods that Australia imported and exported. The telecommunication equipment was highest in 2004, while the toy/ sports equipment was the goods that have the value smallest. In 1998, 20 billion and 10 billion were imported and exported from China respectively. There were 30 billion imported and 20 billion exported to China in 2001. Over the following 3 years, these figures were nearly second times as high as the figure in the first of the period. 8 Billion of the telecommunication equipment was imported to China in 2003, compared with the toy/sports equipment was less than approximately 1 billion at the same time. While the telecommunication equipment was imported from was about nearly 5 billion in2003, while only 2 billion of the toy/sports equipment was imported in 2004. By contrast, the figure for furniture and computers were equaled 6 billion in 2004 and 5 billion in 2003. A similar figure could be seen in the clothes was about 4 billion in 2003 and 2004.
The bar chart illustrates information about the cost of merchandise that Australia
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imported
from China exporting to China from Australia between 6 years from 1998 to 2004, While The second chart compares the sort of
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goods
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imported
between China 2003 and 2004.

It is
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clear
that there was an upward trend in the value of
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goods
that Australia
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imported
and exported. The telecommunication
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equipment
was highest in 2004, while the toy/ sports
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equipment
was the
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goods
that have the value smallest.

In 1998, 20
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billion
and 10
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billion
were
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imported
and exported from China
respectively
. There were 30
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billion
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imported
and 20
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billion
exported to China in 2001. Over the following 3 years, these
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figures
were
nearly
second times as high as the
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figure
in the
first
of the period.

8
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Billion
of the telecommunication
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equipment
was
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imported
to China in 2003, compared with the toy/sports
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equipment
was less than approximately 1
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billion
at the same time. While the telecommunication
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equipment
was
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imported
from was about
nearly
5
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billion
in2003, while
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2
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billion
of the toy/sports
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equipment
was
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imported
in 2004. By contrast, the
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figure
for furniture and computers
were equaled
6
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billion
in 2004 and 5
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billion
in 2003. A similar
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figure
could be
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in the clothes was about 4
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billion
in 2003 and 2004.
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows the value of goods that Australia imported from China and those exported to China from Australia. The second chart shows the types of goods imported from China.

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218 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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