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The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. 7aPK2
In this graphic present us workers who are women and men whose depend on the percentage of business from different countries between 2005 and 2015 years. According to percentages men has always worked more than women that are shown all countries by chart from 2005 to 2015. In Canada, either men or women workers count risen till 2015. And also we can see that women employment is more than other 2 countries. By contrast men, women workers number has increased these times which are given. In South Korea, both of gender has ascended as well. Outside Canada and South Korea, ın Sweden the man who has worked between these times has reduced with not mightily. As in other countries, Women workers number has been getting increased, too. When we check the bar charts out, we can understand that women have joined carrier steps by time and by Technological developments.
In this graphic present us
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whose depend on the percentage of business from
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between 2005 and 2015 years. According to percentages
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by chart from 2005 to 2015.

In Canada, either
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count risen till 2015. And
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number has increased these times which are
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,
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number has been getting increased, too.

When we
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the bar charts out, we can understand that
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carrier steps by time and by Technological developments.
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IELTS academic The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.

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