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The bar charts below give information about the railway system in six cities in Europe. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The given bar charts demonstrates the six different European cities railway system by Kilometers per route and passenger per years, passenger are measured in millions. Overall, Paris had long KM route whereas, Madrid and Berlin had smaller distance as well as small number of passenger than other cities. Additionally, majority of passenger was in Paris. For railway route, in 1863, Paris had long railway route account of 394 KM however, Stockholm had half route than Paris city in 1900. Lisbon and Rome route was 155 KM and 126 KM respectively. Moreover, only 11 KM route was in Madrid in 1981, after 2 decades Berlin had 28 KM. For passengers, in 1900, 1191 million travel in Stockholm. Before 3 decades, in Paris city 775 million passengers travel in rail. With 1927 million passengers Lisbon city had most passenger than other city while, half million passengers was travel in Berlin city in 2001. Rome and Madrid had 144 million and 45 million passengers respectively in 1976 and 1981
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railway system by Kilometers per
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and
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per years,
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are measured
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whereas, Madrid and Berlin had smaller distance
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number of
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than other
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majority of
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was in Paris.

For railway
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, in 1863, Paris had long railway
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account of 394 KM
however
, Stockholm had half
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than Paris city in 1900. Lisbon and Rome
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was 155 KM and 126 KM
respectively
.
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11 KM
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was in Madrid in 1981, after 2 decades Berlin had 28 KM.

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, in 1900, 1191
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travel in Stockholm.
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Before
3 decades, in Paris city 775
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million
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travel in rail. With 1927
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Lisbon city had most
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than other city while, half
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was travel in Berlin city in 2001. Rome and Madrid had 144
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and 45
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respectively
in 1976 and 1981
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IELTS academic The bar charts below give information about the railway system in six cities in Europe.

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