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The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Writing task 1 P0nw
The table conveys the results of a survey conducted between the years 1994 till 1998 which sampled 1 Lakh civilization of transverse section that toured abroad and the reason for their trip. The tables provides information on the places travelled by these individuals over the same period. People prefer spending their holidays in foreign countries as the figures documented we're high among other purposes with more than 20 thousand people travelling abroad. Business trips appear to the second most popular reason for visiting other countries with approximately four thousand people. Among the various parts of the world visited Western European countries seems to be a common choice among travellers with around 19000 individuals in 1994 and roughly around 25000 individuals visiting them. The volume of people journeying to other countries is quite insignificant as less than five thousand folks toured them throughout the documented period. Overall, it is apparent that people love travelling and it is clearly seen by looking at the figures and Northern America comes off as the least preferred choice for travelling among people.
The table conveys the results of a survey conducted between the years 1994 till 1998 which sampled 1 Lakh civilization of transverse section that toured abroad and the reason for their trip. The tables
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information on the places travelled by these individuals over the same period.

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prefer spending their holidays in foreign
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countries
as the figures documented we're high among other purposes with more than 20 thousand
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people
travelling abroad. Business trips appear to the second most popular reason for visiting other
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countries
with approximately four thousand
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people
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Among the various parts of the world visited Western European
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countries
seems to be a common choice among
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travellers
with around 19000 individuals in 1994 and roughly around 25000 individuals visiting them. The volume of
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people
journeying to other
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countries
is quite insignificant as less than five thousand folks toured them throughout the documented period.

Overall
, it is apparent that
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people
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love
travelling and it is
clearly
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by looking at the figures and Northern America
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people
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Writing task 1

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4 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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