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The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.

The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. AVxN
The chat provided represents the results of a survey contains information collected from 100, 000 people asking about their travel history and why they travelled during the period 1994 to 1998. There is a second bar graph which showcase the destination location during the same period. Overall, the chart shows a huge number of people travelled in the year 1998, and least number of people travelled in the year 1995. The bar graph represents the most visited place during all the year was Western Europe. In the chart, most people travelled to abrade country for holidays, and 20, 700 people (that number being the highest) went abrade for holidays in the year 1998. Only 896 people went abroad for other reasons in the year 1995 that being the lowest number. The bar graph illustrates, Western Europe was the most visited place from 1994 to 1998, the most number of visitor count was around 25000 in the year 1998. Very few people visited North America.
The chat provided represents the results of a survey contains information collected from 100, 000
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during the period 1994 to 1998. There is a second bar graph which showcase the destination location during the same period.

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1998, and least
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people
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1995. The bar graph represents the most visited place during all the
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was Western Europe.

In the chart, most
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people
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travelled
to abrade country for holidays, and 20, 700
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people
(that
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being the highest) went abrade for holidays in the
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year
1998.
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896
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people
went abroad for other reasons in the
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year
1995 that being the lowest number.

The bar graph illustrates, Western Europe was the most visited place from 1994 to 1998, the most
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of visitor count was around 25000 in the
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1998.

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few
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visited North America.
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.

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164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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