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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first picture illustrates the proportion of Australian household energy using. The second chart gives the information about Australian household greenhouse gas emissions. It is clear that the proportion of heating using is the largest of total Australian household energy using in the first pictures，which account for 42%. The second large energy using is water heating taking up 30%. There is cooling use which is the lowest energy using in Australian. The remain of Australian household energy using do not over 30% of total energy using. In the second picture， the water heatig of greenhouse gas emissions is more than that of energy using，accounting for 32%. However，the second ，large of greenhouse gas emissions is other appliances which take up 28%. The percentage of heating emission is lower than that of energy using，just taking up 15%. Over all，the large differenceis between the heating of household energy using and that of emission in two pictures.

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 greenhouse gas emissions.

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energy
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