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The diagrams illustrate how a movie theatre evolved from 1980 to present time.

The diagrams illustrate how a movie theatre evolved from 1980 to present time. Overall, the number of projection rooms have significantly increased, whereas the quantity of restrooms remains unchanged. Several new features, such as a Relax room and a DVD shop, have been introduced in comparison to 1980. While in 1980 the cinema had only 2 rooms (Cinema 1 and Cinema 2) dedicated to the projection of films, one large and one small, at present 5 rooms are available (Cinema 1, Cinema 2, Cinema 3, Cinema 4, Cinema 5). 3 of them are bigger (Cinema 1, Cinema 2) and Cinema 3), while 2 are smaller. The biggest rooms present the same size as Cinema 2 in 1980. The smallest rooms present a similar area as Cinema 1 in 1980. In comparison to 1980 a number of new elements have been created, a Food & Drinks area, a Relax room and a DVD room, which are located near the cinema entrance.

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