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Reading Preparation Academic Reading GT Reading Writing Preparation Academic Writing Writing Task 1 Writing Task 2 GT Writing Listening Preparation Speaking Preparation Find a Speaking Partner IELTS Mock Test Essay Vocabulary Topics Related Vocabulary IELTS graph 293 - Male and female academic staff members of a university Last Updated: Sunday, 03 December 2017 16:38Written by IELTS MentorHits: 38702 IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing - Bar Chart/ Column Graph: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012

Bar chart comparing the ratio of male and female human resources in different faculties of a university in 2012. A glance at the chart shows the proportion of male students in Engineering, science, law and business While the number of female employees is higher than in faculties such as arts and education. But for the medical profession, this ratio is almost equal. As illustrated in the illustration, the technical departments were led mainly by men in 2012 because 82% of them were male. Law, business and science faculties also have a higher number of male students, about six out of ten faculty staff are male. Curiously, a similar proportion of employees from both genders were employed in the medical faculty of this university. Looking further, this university's arts and education faculties have more female teachers than men. In the education department, more than seven out of ten active practitioners are women. The number of female staff is also evident in the Faculty of Arts and their proportion is around 60%.

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