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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. VJoA
The pie charts illustrates use of energy and green house gas emissions in Australia in percentage. Overall, the highest amount of energy uses through of heating equipments and green house gas emissions exception of given equipments. To begin with use of energy in Australian houses, the more energy consumed by heating element which was just more than two fifths. The second highest energy used by water heating element at 32. while, cooling equipment was merely 2 consumed energy and that of the two fold consumed energy lighting equipments. 7 percentage of tatal energy consumed by refrigerator. Exception, 15 percentage energy used to other equipment. In terms of green house gas emissions through of house hold equipment which was the highest gas emissions by water heating equipments with 32. similarly, 28 of total emissions gas exception of equipment. That of hlaf of gas emissions by refrigerator at 14 and the just more than heating elements were emissions gas which wah 15. Lighting throw to gas emissions which was 8. The lowest gas emissions by cooling equipments which was mirely 3.
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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