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The bar chart gives information about oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

The bar chart gives information about oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. DD1j
The bar chart illustrates information about the production of oil for many Gulf nations from 1990 to 2010. Overall, it can be noted from the data that the highest amount of oil was produced by Saudi Arabia rather than for other five different countries of Gulf in the given period. In detail, in 1990, more than 8 millions of barrels in every day produced by Saudi Arabia and after 15 years, it reached at just near of 11 millions of barrels. For Iran, 4 millions of barrels was produced oil production capacity in 2005 than in both 1990 and 2000 which was 3. 5 millions of barrels and 3. 9 millions of barrels per day respectively. In contrast, the production of oil capacity for Qatar was less that stood at almost near of 1 millions of barrels in all years. However, for UAE, oil production capacity was greater in comparison to Kuwait and Iraq was similar between 1990 and 2005. The production of oil capacity was increase by 1 millions of barrels in 2010 for both Kuwait and Iraq.
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IELTS academic The bar chart gives information about oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

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