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British emigrated to difference countries

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The bar chart illustrates how many British emigrated to Australia, Spain, New zealand, The USA and France in between 2004 to 2007. Also, It is measured in Overall, it is clear the most popular place to move was Australia. The Emigration to Australia stood up over 40, 000 people in 2004, which was approximately 6, 000 higher than Spain and doubled than three other countries. Apart from a raised to around 52, 000 in 2006. The second popular country to moved was Spain although number of the emigration decreased below 30, 000 people in 2007. Despite it, this character was still higher than the remaining three countries. Around 20, 000 people emigrated to New Zealand every year during the period, while The USA fluctuated between 20-25, 000 people over the time. Even the number of People moved to France in 2005 was above 30, 000 in dropped almost by half in 2007 around 18, 000 and was the least popular country to emigrate at the end of the period.

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 in 2004, which was approximately 6, 000 higher than Spain and doubled than three other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
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 in 2007. Despite it, this character was still
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people
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