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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the green house gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the green house gas emissions which result from this energy use. NGoN
The pie charts illustrates the proportion of energy utilization compared with greenhouse emissions from energy consumption in an average Australian household. Overall, it is immediately evident that heating accounts for a significantly large percentage of energy used, whereas energy is minimally utilized for cooling. Furthermore, heating and water heating accounts for a major source of greenhouse emissions. Australian residents utilize 42% of energy for heating and 30% for water heating. In addition, 15% of energy is used to power other appliances. Refrigeration and lighting account for 7% and 4% of energy consumption respectively, while a mere 2% of energy is utilized for cooling. A similar pattern is observed in greenhouse gas emissions in Australian households. Information obtained from the pie charts indicate that the source of more than 45% of greenhouse gas emissions is from water heating and heating. Other appliances also account for 28% of emissions while refrigeration and lighting are the sources of 22% of greenhouse gas emissions. Finally, cooling is clearly the least source of emissions accounting for only 3%.
The pie charts illustrates the proportion of
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energy
utilization compared with
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greenhouse
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emissions
from
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energy
consumption in an average Australian household.

Overall
, it is immediately evident that
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heating
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accounts
for a
significantly
large percentage of
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energy
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used
, whereas
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energy
is
minimally
utilized for cooling.
Furthermore
,
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heating
and water
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heating
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accounts
for a major
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source
of
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greenhouse
emissions.

Australian residents utilize 42% of
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energy
for
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heating
and 30% for water
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heating
.
In addition
, 15% of
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energy
is
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used
to power other appliances. Refrigeration and lighting
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account
for 7% and 4% of
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energy
consumption
respectively
, while a mere 2% of
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energy
is utilized
for cooling.

A similar pattern
is observed
in
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greenhouse
gas
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emissions
in Australian households. Information obtained from the pie charts indicate that the
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source
of more than 45% of
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greenhouse
gas
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emissions
is from water
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heating
and
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heating
. Other appliances
also
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account
for 28% of
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emissions
while refrigeration and lighting are the
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sources
of 22% of
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greenhouse
gas
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emissions
.
Finally
, cooling is
clearly
the least
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source
of
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emissions
accounting for
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only
3%.
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the green house gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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