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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. bWPB
The diagram shows the stages of manufacturing carbonated drinks. The production process is mainly divided into 5 stages. Stage 1 is water cleaning where raw water is filtered, softened and processed with some chemicals which is then pumped to the next stage. In the next stage, water from stage 1 is heated through electric heaters, cooled through cooling pipes and then carbonated, thus making it ready for the next stage. Stage 3 is where the carbonated water is sent to the mixing tank and mixed with desired syrup, color and flavour to get the desired product. In stage 4 of the production process, the carbonated drink is then filtered and filled in bottles or cans. Stage 5 which is the final stage is where the bottles or cans of carbonated drink are packed into boxes and the packed boxes of carbonated drink are transported to the supermarkets through an appropriate carrier.
The diagram
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shows
the
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stages
of manufacturing
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carbonated
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drinks
. The production process is
mainly
divided into 5 stages.

Stage 1 is
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water
cleaning where raw
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water
is filtered
, softened and processed with
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some
chemicals which is then pumped to the
next
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stage
. In the
next
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stage
,
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water
from
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stage
1
is heated
through electric heaters, cooled through cooling pipes and then
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carbonated
,
thus
making it ready for the
next
stage.

Stage 3 is where the
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carbonated
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water
is
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sent
to the mixing tank and mixed with desired syrup, color and
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flavour
to
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get
the desired product. In
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stage
4 of the production process, the
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carbonated
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drink
is then filtered and filled in bottles or cans.
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Stage
5 which is the final
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stage
is where the bottles or cans of
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carbonated
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drink
are packed
into boxes and the packed boxes of
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carbonated
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drink
are transported
to the supermarkets through an appropriate carrier.
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IELTS academic The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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