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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The first chart illustrate how energy consumption in Australian household and second chapter shows this energy use how effect to gas emissions. In detail, heating and other appliances has hole difference in these diagrams which heating consumption is 42 and other appliances is 15 percent. But, when use these energy types gas emissions according to 15 percent and 28 percent. Furthermore, water heating has not big difference in consumption and emission. When household use refrigeration, they just use 7 percent energy but, gas emissions is 14 percent. Cooling and lighting just consist of 2 and 4 percent in electric consumption which, their gas emissions according to 3 percent and 8 percent in emissions. In summary, heating and water heating consumption has very big percent in all using energy and their emissions appropriate to this consumption which, 15 percent and 32 percent
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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  American English
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140 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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