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Water used by Australia in 2004 in different sectors.

Water used by Australia in 2004 in different sectors. BY65w
The given pie chart illustrates the information about usage of water in different sectors and bar graph delineates the data about water used for domestic use in Australia over period of 1year in 2004. Overall, it is apparently seen that the most of water was used by houses and in houses most of water was assist in bathroom. Looking data in detail, the more than half of pie was covered with water used by residential houses while, apartments use 13% of water and it's half of water was assist by government sectors. The water used other sectors was 3%. An interesting point was that the water assist by industries and business was almost same which was 11%, respectively. Furthermore, the most of water used was in bathrooms by residential. The water used in gardens and bathrooms was approximately same which was about 27%. Along with this 20% of water was used in washing clothes while, it's half of water was assist in kitchen. In addition, water used by toilets was 15% which was slightly low than water used for washing clothes.
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in
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different
sectors and bar graph delineates the data about
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used
for domestic
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use
in Australia over period of 1year in 2004.
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that the most of
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was
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used
by
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houses
and in
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houses
most of
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was assist in bathroom. Looking data in detail, the more than half of pie
was covered
with
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used
by residential
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houses
while, apartments
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use
13% of
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and it's half of
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was assist by
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government
sectors. The
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used
other sectors was 3%. An interesting point was that the
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assist by industries and business was almost same which was 11%,
respectively
.
Furthermore
, the most of
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water
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used
was in bathrooms by residential. The
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water
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used
in gardens and bathrooms was approximately same which was about 27%. Along with this 20% of
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was
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used
in washing clothes while, it's half of
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was assist in kitchen.
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,
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by toilets was 15% which was
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for washing clothes.
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IELTS academic Water used by Australia in 2004 in different sectors.

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