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The figures give information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories . Summarise the in formation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The figures give information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the in formation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 0l7jQ
The line graph illustrates the percentage of growth of economy from 1995 to 2010. The pie charts compare how much household spending are at 15-yearn interval of same period. Seen toghether, the figures shows a correlation between economic growth Look at the line graph, in initial year growth of economy is approximately 1%, over the next 8 years it fluctuated around over 1%. After that, development of this rose sharly in 2005, about 4%. However, there was a dramatic decrease between 2005 and 2008, then it tened to growth in 2010 Regarding the pie charts, in the period of increase 1%, spending for food housing is one in four to one in third, and clothing, entertaiment, travel is only under 8%. On the other hand in 2005, as economic growth is at highest point, the expenditure for food is less than 23%, housing is 30 % and three other were roughly 10%. However, after the lowest point of economic growth - tending to increase again, the figure for housing remained the same, while food increased 10% and clothing, entertainment, travel were idendical in first period Overall, the relationship between economic growth and expenditure for clothing, entertainment, travel, housing is proportionnal, but the opposite was true for food
The line graph illustrates the percentage of
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of economy from 1995 to 2010. The pie charts compare how much household spending are at 15-yearn interval of same period.
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Look at the line graph, in initial year
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of economy is approximately 1%, over the
next
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in 2005, about 4%.
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in 2010

Regarding the pie charts, in the period of increase 1%, spending for
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housing is one in four to one in third, and clothing,
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entertaiment
, travel is
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under 8%.
On the other hand
in 2005, as
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economic
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is at highest point, the expenditure for
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food
is less than 23%, housing is 30 % and three other were roughly 10%.
However
, after the lowest point of
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economic
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growth
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tending to increase again, the figure for housing remained the same, while
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food
increased 10% and clothing, entertainment, travel were
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in
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Overall
, the relationship between
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and expenditure for clothing, entertainment, travel, housing is
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,
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IELTS academic The figures give information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the in formation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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